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From Ecclesial Language to Public Theology: Translating Participatory Soteriology into Systematic Discourse
Abstract
Contemporary Protestant systematic theology has often struggled to articulate salvation as transformative of the human subject without compromising the logical priority of justification or the Creator–creature distinction. Participatory soteriologies arising from ecclesial contexts are frequently marginalized because their language is perceived as imprecise or metaphysically excessive. This article contends that the primary obstacle is methodological intranslatability rather than doctrinal incompatibility. By translating ecclesial language into systematic categories—participation, constitution, and ecclesial embodiment—this study demonstrates that participatory soteriology can be rendered intelligible, critically evaluated, and doctrinally compatible within Protestant theology. The framework preserves the foundational status of justification, distinguishes ontological kind from mode of existence, and situates transformation within the church’s visible life. The article concludes that disciplined translation provides a legitimate space for participatory language, enabling theology to address the lived consequences of salvation without compromising its doctrinal foundations.
Introduction
Protestant systematic theology exhibits ambivalence toward participatory accounts of salvation. Union with Christ, sanctification, and ecclesial formation remain central, yet articulating salvation as genuinely transformative often triggers suspicion: such accounts risk ontological fusion or overemphasizing experiential dimensions. This suspicion is less a doctrinal objection than a methodological one. Participatory soteriologies are embedded in ecclesial practices where language is performative and pedagogical. When transferred to academic discourse without translation, they appear conceptually unstable.
Translation, understood as re-description rather than reduction, can preserve theological intent while rendering it publicly intelligible. This article introduces three categories for such translation: participation (relational orientation toward Christ), constitution (formation without ontological change), and ecclesial embodiment (observable communal manifestation). The argument unfolds in five stages: diagnosing intranslatability, establishing participation as a public category, articulating constitution, demonstrating ecclesial embodiment, and drawing methodological implications for Protestant soteriology.
1. The Problem of Intranslatability in Ecclesial Theology
Marginalization of participatory soteriology stems from methodological misalignment. Ecclesial language functions performatively, sustained by communal practices rather than analytic clarity. Academic theology demands detachment, comparison, and falsifiability; ecclesial claims appear excessive when assessed without context. Semantic density is misread as conceptual incoherence.
Translation preserves functional equivalence: it identifies operative theological claims and restates them in categories that permit critical engagement. Properly conducted, it exposes rather than conceals commitments, allowing Protestant theology to speak of transformation and participation without collapsing doctrinal boundaries.
2. Participation as a Public Theological Category
Participation need not imply ontological identity. Reconceived as a relational and teleological category, it describes the orientation of the subject toward Christ without changing its ontological kind. Union with Christ is mediated, covenantal, and eschatologically oriented; participation names the structure of that relation, not its substance.
Participation is teleological, not causal: it presupposes justification, which establishes standing before God, while describing the life toward which salvation moves. This preserves the priority of justification, clarifies transformative effects, and situates participation within observable, accountable practices.
3. Constitution without Ontological Fusion
Constitution articulates how salvation shapes human existence without changing its essence. Transformation is existential, reconfiguring orientation, practices, and ends.
Barth: Participation is actualistic; transformation is derivative and relational, grounded in Christ’s being-for-us.
Rahner: Grace affects subjectivity historically; constitution parallels this attentiveness without adopting transcendental metaphysics.
Theosis: Participation in divine energies illustrates real transformation without ontological fusion; Protestantism can analogously affirm change without metaphysical inflation.
Reformed concern: Constitution respects justification’s primacy, articulating redeemed life without substituting or competing with its ground.
Constitution thus names real effects while remaining doctrinally accountable.
4. Ecclesial Embodiment and Salvific Teleology
Transformation must be visible. Ecclesial embodiment situates salvation within communal forms of life, making participation observable.
Barth: Church manifests reconciliation without becoming salvific mechanism.
Rahner: Church mediates grace historically and socially; manifestation not causation.
Theosis: Communal journey enacts transformation; Protestant analogues respect asymmetry.
Reformed perspective (priority): Church orients life toward telos, preserves sola gratia, and allows real testing of participatory claims.
Ecclesial embodiment ensures participatory soteriology is accountable, observable, and coherent with Protestant commitments.
5. Methodological Implications for Protestant Soteriology
Participatory soteriology is methodologically viable if:
- Ground vs. telos: Justification as declarative ground, participation as oriented telos.
- Ontology vs. mode of existence: Transformation affects orientation/practices, not essence.
- Means vs. manifestation: Church manifests, does not generate salvation.
These distinctions protect sola gratia, preserve ontological integrity, and situate transformation within ecclesial life. Methodological discipline ensures participation enriches Protestant soteriology without compromising doctrinal identity.
Conclusion
The marginalization of participatory soteriology is a problem of translation, not doctrine. Translating ecclesial language into participation, constitution, and ecclesial embodiment renders claims intelligible, observable, and doctrinally compatible. Proper ordering—justification first, transformation derivative, church as manifestation—allows Protestant theology to articulate the lived consequences of salvation responsibly.
This framework establishes a disciplined space for participatory language, enabling theology to address sanctification, formation, and the tangible effects of salvation without overstepping Protestant commitments. Future research may extend this method to pneumatology and theological anthropology, ensuring that systematic theology remains both analytically rigorous and faithful to lived ecclesial realities.
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